Monday, November 3, 2008

Wedding Night Candles, a favourite poem of mine

Sometime ago, I wrote this poem, I really love it especially the magical flow.

Wedding Night Candles
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my language, i wish it flows
a dawn glass of whisky so
light and gently gold as
the morning sun on
the heart and sight

my vocabulary, i wish each
comes away a shade of a
priceless gemstone that keeps
my passion for life burning
like wedding night candles

john tiong chunghoo

Alexander Keli Mutua (10/10/2007 7:32:00 AM) A perfect blend of a love poem. Good work!

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